[Essay] Please review the letter

[mgn_v]

Question:

You are living in an English-speaking country and want to arrange some English lessons to help with your job. You notice an advertisement for an English teacher who lives nearby.

Write a letter to the local teacher. In your letter:

* explain where you saw the advertisement
* say what and why you want to study
* suggest where and when you would like to study

Answer:


Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Rahul, I am living in Sydney. Recently, I moved from India to Australia. I would like to join the English course which can help my work related problem.

Today morning, I bought the "Sydney Herald" newspaper which has the classifieds section. I noticed an advertisement saying the "English Course" has been conducted for learners with the address and telephone details.

Since I moved to Sydney from non-native English speaking country, I am finding difficulties to cope up with native speakers. I would like to improve my listening and vocabulary skills, which can help to complete the job perfectly. My job responsibility is to gather the information from the client. Sometimes, I am unable to understand their vocabulary and accent.

In the advertisement, I have seen the branches which are conducting the English training in Sydney and Melbourne. I would like to join the Sydney branch which is nearest for me and like to start the course from next month 1st week onwards.

I hope to hear your response soon.

Yours faithfully,
Rahul.

 

[emsr2d2]

This looks remarkably similar to a previous post about a letter to a neighbour about a forthcoming party.

Again, as I did with that post, can I remind you that the forum rules state:

"Please don't ask us to do or correct your homework..."

With work like this, it's better that you do it yourself, have it marked and corrected by your English teacher. If, after that, there are still points about it that you don't understand, then ask us if we can help or elaborate.

 

[mgn_v]

I'm preparing for the English test which is conduct by British Council. I'm preparing the written communication by myself. I don't have any classes or teacher. These essays are not my home work for class. Of course, these essays are test my written communication level.