Please tell me!!

[wendy]

"I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of you guys partying like ******* animals"

If I change the sentence like this

"I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of your partying like ******* animals"

1.Is it grammatical and not clumsy??

2.Does it still have same meaning as the original??

 

[Tdol]

It's rather clumsy- it also means something slightly different- it suggests that the partying was probably a one-off event. ;-)