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wendy

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"I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of you guys partying like ******* animals"

If I change the sentence like this

"I was on your Web site, and you have some pictures and videos of your partying like ******* animals"

1.Is it grammatical and not clumsy??

2.Does it still have same meaning as the original??
 
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Tdol

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It's rather clumsy- it also means something slightly different- it suggests that the partying was probably a one-off event. ;-)
 
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