pls check these sentences

[jctgf]

hi,

are these sentences ok?

1) what time the bus collect us tomorrow?

2) what time the bus comes?

3) does this bus pass by Dundas Street?

4) did it go through? (asking if my credit card was accepted during a purchase)

thanks,
jc

 

[Flyingbird]

All sentences sound ok in conversation.

 

[jctgf]

All sentences sound ok in conversation.

hi,

i am especially confused with "to pass by"...

does the 3rd sentence convey what i really mean?

what i want to know is if the bus stops at any stop of Dundas St...

should i use a better verb instead of "to pass by"?

thanks,
jc