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Z Zoe2008 Key Member Joined Jan 16, 2008 Member Type Student or Learner Native Language Korean Home Country South Korea Current Location China Feb 26, 2008 #1 After checking, I confirm that the data of the attached file is correct
S Shakespeare's brother Member Joined Feb 18, 2008 Member Type Academic Feb 26, 2008 #2 Zoe, do you mean make it more natural? The sentence is fine as it is.