[Grammar] pls hlp me

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koppalan

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dear sir
I want send mail to my boss i have paid some amount to land owner but i dont no how writ in good english pls help me herewith i am sending the words

  • we went to Mr. Jules Minamo (finance consultancy) office and we paid part paid aginste the out standing amount of CFA 10,00,000 to the land owner
 

Nightmare85

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Hello and welcome to UsingEnglish :up:

To be honest: I cannot really help you but I will try to correct your text:
Dear guys,
I want to send a mail to my boss. I have paid some amount to land owner but I don't know how write in good English. Please help me here. I am sending the words:
Your other text:
We went to Mr. Jules Minamo (finance consultancy) office and we paid part paid against the out standing amount of CFA 10,00,000 to the land owner.
If the Minamo office belongs to Mr. Jules, you will have to write:
We went to Mr. Jules' Minamo office.
If the office is called "Mr. Jules Minamo office", you will have to write:
We went to the Mr. Jules Minamo office.
(I believe it's the 1st one...)

The problem is that I cannot really understand what you are trying to say.
(The meaning of your text.)

I'm sure some other members will help you...

Cheers!
 
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