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[jkl]

Please correct the mistakes.
Dear "B"
FYI the elevator is out of order since 5:30 PM today, March 14, 2008. The elevator doors are open and they won't close up with pressing the closing button. Out of order singns are posted on the elevator doors on each floor. I have called the maintenance nobody came to fix it until the closing of the store.
Thanks for your attention regarding this matter.
"B"

 

[David L.]

FYI the elevator has been out of order since 5:30 p.m. today, March 14, 2008. The elevator doors are open and they won't close when the button is pressed. 'Out of Order' signs are posted on the elevator doors on each floor. I have called (the-omit) maintenance but nobody had been to fix it prior to the closing of the store.

Thanks for your attention regarding this matter.
or, since as yet he has not given his 'attention to the matter':
Thanking you in advance for your attention to this matter.