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Hi There. I am a new member of this group and i want help from you that how to reproduce the following paragraph in formal writing using style and register:
" Dear Pat,
Sorry we screwed up that order. Sending plants across country is a risky business. Some of them just can't take the strain. Some dys I can't take the strain myself!. We'll send you some more plants sometime next week and we'll credit your account for $372."
(Scene: Your nursery sells plants not only in your store but also by mail order. Roday you've received a letter from Pat Sykes, complaining that the plants(in a $572 order) did not arrive in a satisfactory condition)
This is it. Plz help me and rewrite the above paragraph in formal english.
thnx a lot
Ma-roof
" Dear Pat,
Sorry we screwed up that order. Sending plants across country is a risky business. Some of them just can't take the strain. Some dys I can't take the strain myself!. We'll send you some more plants sometime next week and we'll credit your account for $372."
(Scene: Your nursery sells plants not only in your store but also by mail order. Roday you've received a letter from Pat Sykes, complaining that the plants(in a $572 order) did not arrive in a satisfactory condition)
This is it. Plz help me and rewrite the above paragraph in formal english.
thnx a lot
Ma-roof