Possessive Case

[Hemapala]

Please correct the following sentences:

His sister's children's discipline is commendable.
Discipline of his sister's children is commendable.

Thanks & regards,

Hemapala

 

[heidita]

Please correct the following sentences:

His sister's children's discipline is commendable.:up: only one sister, if they are two sisters: his sisters' children's...

the discipline of his sister's children is commendable.:up:

Thanks & regards,

Hemapala

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