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Is the use of "present" in the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.

Dan Zhao et al. [59] experimentally investigated a one-dimensional (1D) model of a thermoacoustic combustor with entropy waves and a mean flow present in order to study and predict intrinsic thermoacoustic instability and pertaining phenomena.
 

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Is this your own sentence?
 

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Yes.

I am tying to write a text.
 

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What do you mean by 'a mean flow present'?
 

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That makes sense.
 

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"Pertaining phenomena" doesn't work. Do you mean related phenomena​?
 
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