[Grammar] prevention

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Ashiuhto

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Is the following sentence acceptable?

We can do some prevention to prevent these symptoms,for instance, you can exercise regularly, control the balance of healthy foodand the unhealthy one, develop your confidence.
 

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We can do some prevention to prevent these symptoms,for instance, you can exercise regularly, control the balance of healthy foodand the unhealthy one, develop your confidence
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We can take preventive measures/adopt a healthy lifestyle : exercise regularly, eat healthy food and think positively.

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