price increase

[Offroad]

Dear teachers

Does this sentence read well?

The graph/data shows a linear increase in the groceries price as the frequency of rains increases.

Very much appreciated

Offroad

 

[Route21]

I would have rephrased it slightly:

"The graph/data shows a linear increase in the price of groceries as the frequency of rains increases."

Regards
R21

 

[Offroad]

If I replaced 'in' with 'of'.. would they have the same meaning?

The graph/data shows a linear increase in/of the price of groceries as the frequency of rains increases."

Thanks

 

[Rover_KE]

Stick to 'in'.

'...as the frequency of rains increases' is not natural English.

Try '...as rainfall in the region increases'.

Rover

 

[Offroad]

Does this one read well?

It was observed an increase in the prices of groceries with the decrease of temperature.

Very much appreciated

Offroad

 

[Route21]

Does this one read well?
Offroad

No. You'd probably be better off with:
"An increase in the price of groceries with decreasing temperature was observed." or:
"An increase in the price of groceries was observed with decreasing temperature.".

Regards
R21


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