Private Car

[wuwei]

Private Car
Private car become more and more prevalent in China, what the private car benefit you and what the private car damage you, different poeple have the defferent opions.
One is private car can improve the life quality, owning a private means more convenience, we can expand our living area, we can drive our private car in the rainning day, and we can go home weekly if we are working in the city where we are not born in it.
The others think that disadvantage of owning a provate car is more than the advantage, traffic jam, traffic accident, greenhouse effect, more and more phenomenon alarm us that over-exhaust is becoming the biggest problem at present.
In my opnion, owning a private car is the direction in present society, but we can develop the new energy for the car driving to resolve the conflict between developing the car industry and the protecting the enviroment, Solar battery, hydrogen fuel, maybe other pureness power.

 

[Anglika]

Private Car

Private car [Private cars OR The private car] become [(have /has) become/(are/is) becoming] more and more prevalent in China. What [How does/How can] the private car benefit you or damage you? Different poeple have defferent opions .
One is [One opinion is that a / A] private car can improve the quality of life. Owning a private car means more convenience. We can expand our living area, [if it is raining]we can drive our private car, and we can go home weekly if we are working in the city where we are not born in it [delete - not necessary].
The others think[Another opinion is] that the disadvantages of owning a provate car is more than [outweigh/are greater than] the advantages. For example, traffic jams, traffic accidents, the greenhouse effect; more and more phenomena alarm us. that over-exhaust is [The effect of exhaust fumes is] becoming the biggest problem at present.
In my opnion, owning a private car is the direction [a trend] in present society, but we can develop a new energy system for the car to resolve the conflict between developing the car industry and the [delete - not required here] protecting the enviroment. Possible developments are aSolar [solar-powered] battery, hydrogen fuel, and maybe other pureness means of supplying power.

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[Mahirr]

Woow Anglika! As a new member, I liked the way you have made some grammatical corrections on that short paragraph by Wuwei.. I'm also here to learn & augment my English which is sort of weak at this point in time. I hope I'll have the privilege to expand my English here with those fascinatingly tremendious forum members.

So long! :up: