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peter123

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Hi there,
Please proofread the following sentences.

1. The change has inevitably raised suspicious that it has tailored its requirements to a certain person.
2. There is no telling why the government has picked none of them.

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pete
 

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Hi there,
Please proofread the following sentences.

1. The change has inevitably raised suspicions that it has tailored its requirements to a certain person. [What is "it"? Does this refer to a previous sentence?]
2. There is no telling why the government has picked none of them. :up:

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pete
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