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[peter123]

Hi there,
Can you proofread the following instructions?

Get students assess or comment on one other while they are giving their speeches. This will help involve all students to the loral esson.

Thanks
pete

 

[Neillythere]

Hi there,
Can you proof-read the following instructions?

Get students to assess or comment on one another while they are giving their speeches.

This will help involve all students in the oral lesson.

Thanks
pete

I'm not a teacher, but the above amendments would be my recommendation.

Regards

Sorry, I've not yet mastered the art of identifying the specific changes to/in a quote. Duh!

 

[RonBee]

While they are giving their speeches? How about afterwards?

 

[peter123]

hi there,

How about this?

Get students to assess or comment on one another after they have given their speeches.

This will help involve all students in the oral lesson.

 

[hae mi]

Can you proofread the following instructions?
Get students assess or comment on one another while they are delivering their speeches. This will help involve all the students in the oral lesson.

i think this one is better...;-)

 

[schmoozed]

After their speeches, let students assess or comment one another. This helps them in their moral lessons.

 

[Neillythere]

All the suggestions work for me, but beware of changing the original intent.

Regards

PS: I've only just noticed the potential availability of a spell-checker. My original response was longer, but installing the spell-checker wiped it out! :-( Lucky guys!