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Hanka

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Hi,

could you please check this sentence:

The period of validity of the wage level may be changed according to the employee’s work performance.

Thanks a lot!

Hanka
 

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Can you just expand on what is being said? Do you mean that the salary level will be subject to review on the basis of the employee's work performance?
 

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Can you just expand on what is being said? Do you mean that the salary level will be subject to review on the basis of the employee's work performance?

Yes, there is probably a period stipulated for which the salary level is valid, but if the level of employee´s performance is lower or higher, the salary level may be reviewed.
 

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Then just use what Angika suggested, with the added word "peridodical"


The salary level will be subject to periodical review on the basis of the employee's work performance.
 

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How about:

The stated salary is liable for review within the stipulated period for the salary depending on the performance of the employee.
 
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