[General] Proposal report - Introduction

[barnej0096]

I am writing a proposal report. Is it OK to write: 'The purpose of this proposal is to look at the plans of the swimming pool that is going to be built in the town centre and indicate how it may benefit to the community'?

 

[emsr2d2]

I am writing a proposal report. Is it OK to write: 'The purpose of this proposal is to look at the plans [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] for the swimming pool that is going to be built in the centre of the town and [STRIKE]indicate[/STRIKE] how it [STRIKE][STRIKE]may[/STRIKE][/STRIKE] might benefit [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] the community'?

It's OK with my amendments in red.