put together with another activity.

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Music can greatly help you calm down after a hard day’s work, put together with another activity.

Does the second part implied as the following?

Music can greatly help you calm down after a hard day’s work, if it puts together with another activity.

Music can greatly help you calm down after a hard day’s work, when it puts together with another activity.
 

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It means 'if it is put together with another activity'. Where did you find this?
 

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The original sentence is not correct.
 

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The original sentence is not correct.
It seems that I can't rely on this magazine any more. I'll send an email to the chief editor of that magazine and ask him/her to be much more careful when they want to publish such an unreliable magazine.

You meant the following is incorrect:

Music can greatly help you calm down after a hard day’s work, put together with another activity.
 
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I don't get why they added the second bit.

'Music can greatly help you calm down after a hard day’s work.'

It doesn't need another activity.
 

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Don't be too hard on the writers of the magazine. The English is not that bad. I mean, it might not be perfect but I've seen a lot worse.
 

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Perhaps music and meditation combo helps even more.
 

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Don't be too hard on the writers of the magazine. The English is not that bad. I mean, it might not be perfect but I've seen a lot worse.
You are right. But they made bad mistakes in the link below:
https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/threads/251831-Music

Anyway, they have replied that those English teachers were wrong!! Not all native English teachers are necessarily good and perfect. They also said that the way we wrote was good and all of what you have mentioned was not reasonable and acceptable !!! I have argued with them and tried to convinced them via chats and phone calls. I said that there are many English teachers here. Are all of them wrong?!!! They wouldn't accept their faults. I am really sorry for those people with their firm beliefs.
 
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Then don't use their magazines.
 

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It seems that I can't rely on this magazine any more. I'll send an email to the chief editor of that magazine and ask him/her to be much more careful when they want to publish such an unreliable magazine.

If they have a habit of doing it, then complain. Plenty of online native speaker publications make mistakes- people are publishing fast and things don't always get checked carefully in the race to be online.
 
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