Queen of the Nightscapes

[RonBee]

Queen of the Nightscapes

There once was a woman named Adrienne
Who lived as a fantasy in the minds of men.
Once or twice--or so it seems--
I thought I heard
(In the voice of a forest bird)
This dazzling beauty
Calling to me,
But it was only in my dreams.




1993

 

[susiedqq]

Clever -

A suggestion - change the first line to:

Once, a woman named Adrienne

 

[Dr. Jamshid Ibrahim]

Clever -

A suggestion - change the first line to:

Once, a woman named Adrienne

No, Susiedqq Ron can't change it because I think it is written after a poem I read in common muse some time ago:

There was a monk of great renown
Who......

 

[susiedqq]

There are millions of limmericks beginning with
"There once was a . . . ."

I thought that he did not want him poem to be in that format - which is a cliche.

 

[RonBee]

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