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Hello.

XXX quickly developed into a global brand supplying spare parts of high variety of products and high quality for heavy duty vehicles and trailers.

Is it ok to say "quickly developed into a global brand" meaning that XXX became a global brand over a short period?

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"... quickly developed into a global brand" is absolutely fine. The rest of it has problems though.
 

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XXX quickly developed into a global brand and supplies a wide range of spare parts of high quality for heavy duty vehicles and trailers.

Does it sound better now?
 

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XXX quickly developed into a global brand and supplies a wide range of high quality spare parts [strike]of high quality[/strike] for heavy duty vehicles and trailers.

Does it sound better now?

See above. It's more natural to use "high quality" as an adjective before the noun "spare parts", than "of high quality" after it. I'm not sure about "heavy duty vehicles and trailers". Maybe it's a technical term I'm not aware of. I've heard of "heavy goods vehicles".
 

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Thank you.

The product range contains more than 15.000 items manufactured at its own facilities, thus ensuring a complete closed cycle from production to the highest quality control level of the products.

In this case can I say "...to the highest product quality control level"?
 
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