[Grammar] Qutoe new year!

[ladyTL]

Is it correct?

"Some people left some people came into my life
Bad things happened good things backed up
Life is like a roller coaster, I just have to deal with it
Another year is arriving, so I wish u a happy new year"

 

[emsr2d2]

Is it correct?

"Some people left. Some people came into my life.
Bad things happened. Good things backed up.
Life is like a roller coaster, I just have to deal with it.
Another year is arriving, so I wish you a happy new year."

Did you write this? Is it meant to be read like a poem or just a New Year message?

I've added some punctuation and repaired the word "you" from simply "u".