Pls. could you give me a feedback about my report (content, range, organisation, register). I'm preparing for FCE by myself and I would be really grateful for your help. Thanks a lot in advance.
Question
Last year a new sport and leisure centre opened in your home town. You have recently received the following letter from the manager of the centre.
I am writing to all members of the Active Leisure Club to thank you for your custom over the last year. We want to make the facilities even better this year! Please send a short report to us, telling us what you think are the best and worst aspects of the club. We also want to hear your suggestions for new facilities...
Here is my answer:
Tennis and Squash Club
Introduction
This is in response to your inquiry to describe the advantages and disadvantages of the club.
The Club offers:
- 6 outdoor tennis courts
- 3 squash courts
- gymnasium
- fitness centre
The advantages are as follow:
1. It is cheap to use it and changing rooms are clean.
2. The fitness centre is equipped very well.
3. Online booking system is available.
4. The staff is excellent, especially if you are new to exercise and sports.
The main problems are as follow:
I would recommend extending the opening hours and trying to solve problem with air-condition. In my opinion, it would be worth the best ensuring missing kids club, in connection with how many families with small children have moved to this area recently.
Question
Last year a new sport and leisure centre opened in your home town. You have recently received the following letter from the manager of the centre.
I am writing to all members of the Active Leisure Club to thank you for your custom over the last year. We want to make the facilities even better this year! Please send a short report to us, telling us what you think are the best and worst aspects of the club. We also want to hear your suggestions for new facilities...
Here is my answer:
Tennis and Squash Club
Introduction
This is in response to your inquiry to describe the advantages and disadvantages of the club.
The Club offers:
- 6 outdoor tennis courts
- 3 squash courts
- gymnasium
- fitness centre
The advantages are as follow:
1. It is cheap to use it and changing rooms are clean.
2. The fitness centre is equipped very well.
3. Online booking system is available.
4. The staff is excellent, especially if you are new to exercise and sports.
The main problems are as follow:
- The Club is not open on Sunday evenings
- Fitness centre is not air-conditioned.
- Kids club – missing.
I would recommend extending the opening hours and trying to solve problem with air-condition. In my opinion, it would be worth the best ensuring missing kids club, in connection with how many families with small children have moved to this area recently.
