[Grammar] requests for help

[Moumita Sarkar]

"Actually sir, we have attended a conference, held in our college and in between the session we just kidding by clicking our picture" is the sentence making correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

"Actually, sir, we [STRIKE]have attended[/STRIKE] were attending a conference (no comma here) [STRIKE]held in[/STRIKE] at our college. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] In between [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] sessions, we just [STRIKE]kidding[/STRIKE] messed around by clicking our picture". Is [STRIKE]the sentence making[/STRIKE] it correct?

Note my corrections above. I don't know what you mean by the underlined part.