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sahanav

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We are pleased to receive your valuable input regarding your company’s logistical requirements; concerning Russian Trade.
 

Getemjan

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Drop the semicolon. Also, within this limited context, I don't see any reason to capitalize the word trade.

The grammar is otherwise correct, but the word choice seems unnecessarily formal to me.
 
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