[Grammar] rising / flourishing

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Ashiuhto

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Is the following sentence acceptable?

The rising and flourishing of online games also causes the tendency that students addicted to the Internet to be getting more and more serious.
 
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The growing popularity of online games also caused the problem of internet addiction among students.

not a teacher
 
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