[Idiom] Sam Smith confirmed openly last year

GoodTaste

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Someone wrote the following in the Chinese forum and I wonder whether the writing sounds natural in English:

[FONT=PingFang SC, Source Han Sans SC, Noto Sans CJK SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei UI, Microsoft YaHei, sans-serif] [/FONT]Sam Smith confirmed openly last year that he was gay.And what is more shocking is that you, a proud girl, admitted you've been with him for so long.
It is a funny yet dangerous world, isn't it?

Source: (a Chinese forum which needs registering and recommending)
 

GoesStation

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The English is natural for the level of language typically used in on-line forums. There should be a space after the period ("full stop" in British English).
 
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