savings on fuel

JACEK1

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Hello!
The other day, a colleague of mine asked me to translate the following question into English for her.

The main purpose of the ferry’s repair is to install new drives that will be modern, more trouble-free and will generate savings on fuel.
or
The main purpose of the ferry’s repair is to install new drives that will be modern, more trouble-free and will contribute to generating savings on fuel.
or
The main purpose of the ferry’s repair is to install new drives that will be modern, more trouble-free and will bring about generating savings on fuel.

Could you please take a look at 'my' three versions, pying special attention to the fragment about "generating savings on fuel"?
Thank you.
 
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bhaisahab

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The first one is better. The third one doesn't work.
 

Tdol

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How about reduce fuel consumption/increase fuel efficiency?
 
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