secret video

AirbusA321

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Please check if both versions are correct and which one is better.

1 I secretly made a video of random people who entered and left a supermarket.
2 I made a secret video of randomly chosen people who entered and left a supermarket.

Additional question: Can I replace "who entered and left" with "entering and leaving"?
 

AirbusA321

Banned
Joined
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Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
German
Home Country
Belgium
Current Location
Philippines
How about these versions?

3 I secretly made a video of random people that were entering and leaving a supermarket.
4 I secretly made a video of random people while (they were) entering and leaving a supermarket.
 
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