Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me check the following sentences.
1. For modern teenagers, Online Socializing Platform also has similar allure.
2. It thoroughly overwhelms teenagers’ heart, seizes/occupies their time, and causes them far away from their homes.
1. For modern teenagers, Online Socializing Platform also has similar allure.
2. It thoroughly overwhelms teenagers’ heart, seizes/occupies their time, and causes them far away from their homes.