Sentece correction

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Md.Salim

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I became father of one more duaghter on 19th August 2007. Is this sentence is right or worng?
 

Anglika

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I became father of one more duaghter on 19th August 2007. Is this sentence is right or worng?[/quote

It's a bit odd. I would write:

My new daughter was born on 19th August 2007.


Your sentence is more grammatical as:
I became the father of another daughter of 19th August 2007
 
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