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Md.Salim

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I became father of one more daughter on 19th August. Is this sentence is right or wrong?
 
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Md.Salim said:
I became father of one more daughter on 19th August. Is this sentence is right or wrong?
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Hi Sadim, this sounds rather weird to me.

I would say:

I am glad to announce the birth of my second/another daughter borne on the ...

cheers;-)
 
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