[Grammar] sentence correction

[contiluo]

Dear teacher,

Would you be kind enough to correct the following two sentences:

1. Two days ago, when I was on my way home in the evening, there was

a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson "fire and water have no mercy."

 

[bhaisahab]

Dear teacher,

Would you be kind enough to correct the following two sentences:

1. Two days ago, when I was on my way home in the evening, there was

a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson "fire and water have no mercy."

1. Two days ago, while I was on my way home in the evening, there was
a fire in my neighbourhood.

2. This teaches us a lesson: "fire and water have no mercy."