[General] sentence correction

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Joannak81

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Hello
Could you be so kind and check these 2 sentences. They do not sound right to me but I do not know what to change.

These charges were originally paid by Mr Fox then Expedia rang us asking for a refund of this payment as full account should has been billed back to Expedia. I am forwarding the email which was sent by Expedia as confirmation.
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Joanna
 

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Welcome to the forums, Joannak81.

I'm afraid I can't make sense of what you wrote.

Who is owed money? Mr. Fox paid what was owed, I understand that. I don't understand why Expedia is asking for a refund, if Mr. Fox is the one who paid it.
 
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