Sentence Repair

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Anonymous

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Hi,

I would like to get your ideas on how to improve the following sentence in order to make it sounds formal and with standard.

"The system will deliver the content to user on every stipulated time"

(This sentence tells user that for every certain time (e.g. 15 mins) the system will deliver the content to user until completion of the content.)

Please help :cry:
 

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"The system will deliver the content to user at stipulated intervals"

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kltakky

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Is this correct?

Dear tdol:

Can I further add on this sentence by saying this :-

The system will deliver the content to user at stipulated interval until content is fully transmitted.

Sounds good to you?

Thank you for your help,,, :D
 

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Re: Is this correct?

kltakky said:
Can I further add on this sentence by saying this :-

The system will deliver the content to user at stipulated interval until content is fully transmitted.

That sounds good, except say intervals.

Welcome to the forum.

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