[Essay] Sentences Correction

[Ferdie11]

Hi,

Would you please tell me if there are any errors in the sentences below? If so, please give me some suggestions.

I want to immediately point out that I never used torrent in downloading files. Yes, I downloaded a couple of files, but it was a long time ago, and it was just, as I can remember, a couple of times. It never happened again.

But now that I know that it is an illegal action, it will never happen again. I promise.

Many thanks.

 

[billmcd]

Looks OK to me. Maybe "for downloading files" or "to download files".

 

[theeexcellence]

Hi,

Would you please tell me if there are any errors in the sentences below? If so, please give me some suggestions.

I want to immediately point out that I never used torrent in downloading files. Yes, I downloaded a couple of files, but it was a long time ago, and it was just, as I can remember, a couple of times. It never happened again.

But now that I know that it is an illegal action, it will never happen again. I promise.

Many thanks.

I want to immediately point out that I never downloaded files in a torrent/ bulk. Yes, I downloaded a couple of files, but it was a long time ago, and it was just, as I can remember, a couple of times. It never happened again.

NOT A TEACHER

 

[tedtmc]

I want to immediately point out that I (have)never downloaded files in a torrent/ bulk.(Torrent is a computer program so it should be capitalized) Yes, I downloaded a couple of files, but it was a long time ago, and it was just, as I can remember, a couple of times. It never happened again.

NOT A TEACHER

not a teacher

 

[Barb_D]

So you downloaded files, just not using Torrent?

Otherwise you can't say you never did, and then say you only downloaded a few.