[Grammar] sentences

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contiluo

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Are the following senetnces acceptable?

1. Tina continually implored her mom to approve her notion of keeping the cat as a pet.

2. Finally, her mom unwillingly said yes with the proviso that Tina promised to keep the house neat and tidy.

 

Mister Micawber

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The register is inconsistent with the topic:

1. Tina badgered her mom to let her keep the cat as a pet.

2. Finally, her mom unwillingly agreed if Tina promised to keep the house clean.
 
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