[Grammar] She or he makes time for friends and family and leisure time activity.

[newkeenlearner]

I believe that a good manager has a personal life. She or he makes time for friends and family and leisure time activity.

It is written by a teacher.

Is this OK?
She or he makes time for friends and family and (makes time for) leisure time activity.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

It's fine. If "She or he" or "He or she" is too wordy for you, you can rephrase it:

- I believe that a good manager has a personal life, making time for friends and family and leisure time activity.
- I believe that a good manager has a personal life and will make time for friends and family and leisure time activity.