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bosun

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If you see any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

1.XX was a tyrant.Because of him, a lot of people suffered a lot.

2. XX is a good city for sightseeing. I still remember all things I saw, visted in there.

3. If you are still hesitating to visit a foreign country, i recommed you to go to XX.
 

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If you see any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

1.XX was a tyrant. Because of him, a lot of people suffered a lot.It is not good English to use the same word in one sentence in this way. You need to change one of them. "...many people suffered a lot"/"a lot of people suffered greatly"

2. XX is a good city for sightseeing. I still remember all the things I saw and visited there.

3. If you are still hesitating to visit [about visiting] a foreign country, I recommend you go to XX.
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