Suggestions/corrections will be in
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eric2004 said:
Sigh, Sir Ron, actually I'm not happy in this special holiday, because I find now I can't logon all of overseas forbidden websites where often publish a great many negtive news in regard to Communists' events.
- Sigh, Sir Ron, actually I'm not happy in this special holiday, because I find now that I can't logon to any of the forbidden overseas websites which often publish a great deal of negative news in regard to Communists' events.
So you want to be able to access those websites, but you can't?
eric2004 said:
Before that I usually used a special communicating tool or a foreign proxy server to visit those websites and I'd known many things that most of common Chinese can never know.
- Before that I usually used a special communicating tool or a foreign proxy server to visit those websites, and I'd found out about things that are the kind of things most Chinese never do find out about.
(In addition to
found out about you could also say
learned or, perhaps,
discovered.)
You must be quite knowledgeable about computers. I don't think I would know how to do that sort of thing.
eric2004 said:
Unfortunately, all of them can't work out now.
- Unfortunately, none of those methods work right now.
eric2004 said:
And I learnt that China government have begun strengthening the extent of news bloackade.
- And I learned that the Chinese government has been strengthening the extent of the news bloackade.
Or:
- And I learned that the Chinese government has been broadening the news blockade.
Fascinating. They must want people not to know certain things. (I realize that is not a brilliant analysis.)
eric2004 said:
Here I'll show you some information about that.
- I'll tell you something about that.
(Normally, one doesn't
show information, although people quite often
reveal information. (It doesn't make sense to me either.)
eric2004 said:
In China you even can't type "democracy" or "freedom" in many famous chatrooms or searching engine, let alone discussing political topics.
- In China you even can't type "democracy" or "freedom" in many well-known chatrooms or search engines, let alone discuss political topics.
Wow!
eric2004 said:
Also, the Internet policemen would try their best to monitor any conncetion out from China and spy who you'll communiate with or what you will watch.
Also, the Internet policemen would do their best to monitor any connection out of China and discover who you'll communiate with or what you watch.
Geez!
eric2004 said:
Much evilest, they would pretend and make up some proxy servers for the people like me who wanna view overseas news, so that they can be easier to control local Chinese as well as arrest these "illegal" viewers.
- Much evilest, they would pretend to be offering a legitimate service and make up some proxy servers for the people like me who wanna view overseas news, so it is easier to control local Chinese as well as arrest these "illegal" viewers.
Much evilest isn't exactly standard English, but I rather like it. However, for something that is more like standard English, try
worst of all. (Of course,
wanna would usually be
want to, at least in formal writing.)
eric2004 said:
What an ugly and foul country China is. I hope heartfully that I'm able to escape from here soon.
Or I may be arrested by them too.
China is the world's largest country. It is also the largest country that is not a democracy.
At least you don't have Howard Dean.
:wink:
eric2004 said:
Btw, now I know it's called "peg" to describe the relation between Renminbe and Dollar.( xixi.
Yes, that's the term they use, at least in news articles. There might be another, more formal term, but I am not sure what it is.
eric2004 said:
Sir, your pronounciation is amazingly correct. this is its chinese character"人民币“. very ironically, it means "people's money")
Well, it is the People's Republic of China. I'm not sure what you mean there by
pronunciation. Anyhow, you can find out a lot on the Internet. (I used Onelook.)
eric2004 said:
We call that "Spring Festival" because it's the first day of a new "Lunar Year" in Eastern Asia. which is always later than the Gregorian Calendar.
As fas as "Spring", I'm not sure about it, but I guess it's because this holiday may be in February of some years, so that's very closed to the March, Spring.
Maybe calling it the "Spring Festival" makes you feel warmer. :wink:
(Say: "close to")
How are you doing? I bet you are feeling better than I am. (I have a cold.)
Take care.
eric2004 said:
So it means after this holiday the Spring will come to the world soon.
Tomorrow is the last day of Lunar Year 2003 and all of Chinese will celebrate and wait for the new year.
Wish your American guys as well as all of people here happy and joyful in the next year.
2003? But that's the Western calendar. Isn't the Chinese year much older than that?
:?
I wish freedom and prosperity for all Chinese people.
