Some poems

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Dingal2000

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Hi All im new to this forum, and it seems like a lovely place, im used to forums , but its a case of making new friend.

But anyway here is a few of my poems, rough copies anyway :) i hope you loike them and some feed back would be great, as i would love to be able to publish my own book of poems someday.

Told from the heart

No one will ever know the real me,No one will ever see.
Nobody will ever know what I really think,
Or know if I am their missing link.
Will anybody want to know what i can really give,
Love? Life? A happy home? as long as we both shall live.
Just to find someone who loves me,is what I really need,
someone to open my feelings,for my broken heart still bleeds.
But only time will tell,if true love comes my way,
Looking for true feelings every single day.
Lovers come and partners go,through this search in life,
for that one and only person I could call my Wife.

VAN


Trusty van, trusty van,
keep me safe today.
You keep me on the road,
no longer have to praye.

ABS and power steering,
you help me drive this far.
I wouldnt feel any safer
if i done this in a car.

You keep me warm,keep me calm,
on a trip of a hundred miles.
Your speakers play me songs,
that feel me full of smiles.

When we part and time goes by,
You`ll be looking rather rusty.
But I`m still here, safe and sound,
You will alway be my trusty.


The Cause of Most Evils

Feelings replaced by angry words.
Tempers run high,and voices start to raise.
Your now out of control and feeling scared.
What are these words your saying?.
You havent got a clue.

This shouting match goes on.
For what seems like hours.
You lift you hand and strick down hard.
Shes no longer moving.
What have you done?.

She lay there still her eyes now glazed.
"SHES DEAD,SHES DEAD", you cry to yourself.
Nothing else seems important now.
"What did i do, why did this happen"
One to many Drinks, The evil that sent you to

PRISON


Death Calls

Silence comes from within my soul,
Nothing but the sound of my heart
Raging, raging, let me out,
Make me free, there is a darkness
Blazing inside me.

Fires so hot, they scold my bones,
My very touch could burn your soul,
The passion of the night
The passion of the night
I take your body, i`ll make it my own.

Inside, you feel me, burning desire
Feeling of hate, now turning to lust
Your body, my soul, becoming as one,
We are one, we are one.
My body is now numb.

Can you feel me looking?
Can you hear me say?
Give me your soul
Give me your soul
You’ll be mine one day.
 

Rach227

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hey dingal

just thought i'd say that those poems are real cool

xxRach227xx
 

Miss Qatar

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Dingal2000 said:
i would love to be able to publish my own book of poems someday.

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God welling, you will :up:








Dingal2000 said:
Silence comes from within my soul,
Nothing but the sound of my heart
Raging, raging, let me out,
Make me free, there is a darkness
Blazing inside me.
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:up:
 

Dingal2000

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I know its been a while since i have been on, but hey thank you so much for all your comments.

Here is one of my latest

My Love, My World

Think of both, i see i know it's right
a feeling so true, a feeling so close
love and closeness i feel
my heart over powered by this emotion

I feel the sense of belonging
I know this is the way it should be
Loving you both, and keeping you
Keeping you both next to my heart

Sometimes i think i cant be human
For what reason no one knows
maybe im just the one person alive
who loves the feeling of looking after two

I long to live this future for ever
As i long to be loved for ever
Because this feeling will never fade
Never Die and never go, for as long as i live

By Me
 
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