someone check it for me?

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If it isn’t tangible does it mean it was never real?
If I memorize it by heart will it last forever?
I clung onto a delicate dream that would disappear before your eyes
Happiness just begun
But sadness already took over

i translated it from chinese to english
just wondering did i do it correctly?
 

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Happiness just began
But sadness has already taken over


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