someone check it for me?

[ling]

If it isn’t tangible does it mean it was never real?
If I memorize it by heart will it last forever?
I clung onto a delicate dream that would disappear before your eyes
Happiness just begun
But sadness already took over

i translated it from chinese to english
just wondering did i do it correctly?

 

[Tdol]

Happiness just began
But sadness has already taken over


;-)