Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise...:'(

[Helped Wanted]

Sentence A:
When I was a little girl, I already loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to be a fashion designer in the future.


Sentence B:
Until now, I still remember an old song my mother had always sung to me when I was small.


Please help correct them if there's any mistakes. Thanks again! T_T

 

[Red5]

Re: Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise...

Sentence A:
When I was a little girl, I already loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to be a fashion designer in the future.

This one is almost perfect, except that I would suggest the following small changes (note that I removed the word already):

When I was a little girl, I loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to become a fashion designer in the future.

Sentence B:
Until now, I still remember an old song my mother had always sung to me when I was small.

This one is also almost correct, except that I don't think you need the words "Until now,".

;-)

 

[RonBee]

Good job, Red!



[Edited for punctuation.]

 

[Helped Wanted]

Thanks for advising again, my teachers! ^o^