Spanned between the hills was

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I am not sure if my sentence is grammatically correct or if it sounds natural. Would you please correct the mistakes?

Spanned between the hills was a suspension bridge under which ran a mighty river.
 
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Spanning the hills...
 
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The bridge spans the river, or it spans the gap between the hills.
 
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'Spanning the valley between the hills ...'
 
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