[Grammar] Starting with more than 25 thousand dollars

[Ctrela]

Good afternoon,could Somebody help me to find out there are mistakes or not. I'm not sure the correctness of this sentence.
"Starting with more than 25 thousand dollars in January, the Internet Express slightly decrease in June. In Augest, there slight increase and then remained stable until December"
Thanks in advance

 

[teechar]

Re: Graf

Good afternoon, could somebody help me to find out if there are any mistakes in my writing? [STRIKE]or not.[/STRIKE] I'm not sure [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] how correct it is. [STRIKE]ness of this sentence.[/STRIKE]

"Starting [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] at [STRIKE]more than 25[/STRIKE] around thirty thousand dollars in January, the income of Internet Express fluctuated slightly [STRIKE]decrease[/STRIKE] and was down to about twenty thousand dollars in June. In August, there was a slight increase, and then the figure remained stable until December."

Thanks in advance.

See above.
You need to write more than that.

You might also want to look at the link below regarding hyphenating compound numbers.

https://www.grammarly.com/blog/hyphen-in-compound-numbers/

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Graf

This is the second thread that you've titled "Graf". That is not an English word. I think you mean "graph". However, please remember that titles should be relevant and specific to their thread and should include some/all of the words you are querying. I am going to change your thread title in a moment.

Please click Like/Thank to show that you understand this and will use more relevant titles in future.