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bosun

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Can i say as follows when I write a personal statement for college admission?

I examined curriculumn guides of other universities and I found out that your school is more specialized in the field of IT.

2. I alslo heared that your faculty are always prepare new students with their excellent knoweldge.

3.I feel confident that you will be satisfied with me and my abilites.
 

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Can i say as follows when I write a personal statement for college admission?

I have examined curriculum guides for other universities and I found out have noted/see that your school is more specialized in the field of IT. :up:

2. I also heard that your faculty are [singular noun/singular verb - is "faculty" the correct word to use? ] always prepare [clarify what you mean by "prepared" here] new students with their excellent knowledge.

Alternative phrasing:

I have heard that students on your courses are always very well taught.

3.I feel confident that you will be satisfied with me and my abilities.
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