[Essay] Stuck!

[thuypham123]

Hello,

I wrote in my essay: "Several factors make Indonesia during this period an interesting case study". I'd like to list those factors, but am not sure how to do that. Your help is much appreciated.

Thuy

 

[Hannie Nguyen]

Hello,

I wrote in my essay: "Several factors make Indonesia during this period an interesting case study". I'd like to list those factors, but am not sure how to do that. Your help is much appreciated.

Thuy

what do you mean by "interesting case study"?
->you should use" There are several factors make Indonesia ..... during this period.
Firstly,...........
Secondly,..........
Finally,..........

 

[emsr2d2]

What do you mean by "interesting case study"?
[STRIKE]->[/STRIKE] You should use" There are several factors which make Indonesia ..... during this period.

Firstly,...........
Secondly,..........
Thirdly, .... (etc)
Finally,..........

Hannie Nguyen - It is good of you to try to answer the question and I note that you are an English teacher. However, unfortunately, as you can see there were some problems with your post. Remember to start every sentence with a capital letter. Your suggestion that "There are several factors make Indonesia ..." was incorrect.