studies

[peter123]

Hi there,
Could you proofread the following sentence?

Studies have shown that children who spend 30-60 minutes a day on general reading will achieve better results in language subjects, mathematics, etc; however, many teenagers nowadays prefer playing computer games to reading.


thanks
pete

 

[Anglika]

Hi there,
Could you proofread the following sentence?

Studies have shown that children who spend 30-60 minutes a day on general reading will achieve better results in language subjects, mathematics, etc; however, many teenagers nowadays prefer playing computer games to reading.


thanks
pete

Seems fine to me.