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kks_krishna

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[FONT=&quot]Suggest good style for the following sentence:
"For more details on the technology background please refer to the DD technical document."[/FONT]
 

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[FONT=&quot]Suggest good style for the following sentence:[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]"For (additional) details on the technology background (that is required), please refer to the DD technical document."[/FONT]

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"For further details on the technological background please refer to the DD technical document."
 

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This also sounds good :)
 
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