Sum of numbers

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Dear teachers

Do these sentece read well?

  1. If you add the amount of money reserved to pay rent, which has increased, to the money required to fund basic house needs, results $ 4,000.
  2. If you add the amount of money reserved to pay rent, which has increased, to the money required to fund basic house needs, it results $ 4,000.
  3. If you add the amount of money reserved to pay rent, which has increased, to the money required to fund basic house needs, it results in $ 4,000.
  4. If you add the amount of money reserved to pay rent, which has increased, to the money required to fund basic house needs, it sums up (to) $ 4,000.

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Only 3 reads adequately (I can't say it reads well).

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I'd use ...it comes to $4,000. I'd also change reserved to something like set/put aside to pay the rent, and the money needed to cover basic household costs.
 

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:up: The structure 'If you add X to Y you get Z' also works (informally).

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