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Is this sentence correct??
"It’s so unfortunate that it’s children who succumb as the victims, to such situations. "
 

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I would spell out the second it is and omit the comma.
 

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Another suggestion:

"It’s unfortunate that it is the children who are the victims in such situations."
 
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