[Grammar] Ted smashed the pills of the hallucinogen

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Ted entered quickly to the kitchen. He smashed the pills of the hallucinogen. Then he took it and mixed with beer in a glass."

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

Swap the order of "entered" and "quickly".
Remove "to".
"The pills of the hallucinogen" isn't natural. Try "the hallucinogenic pills".
Turn sentences 2 and 3 into one sentence.
You said "pills" but then said "Then he took it". They don't agree.
You need another word between "mixed" and "with".

 

[Tdol]

I think crushed works better than smashed.

 

[Nikitus]

"Ted quickly entered the kitchen. He smashed the the hallucinogen pills, then he took the pills and mixed them with beer in a glass."

Are the sentences grammatically correct?

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

"Ted quickly entered the kitchen. He [STRIKE]smashed[/STRIKE] crushed [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] the hallucinogenic pills, then he took the pills and mixed them with beer in a glass."

Are the sentences grammatically correct?

Thanks.

See above. You can shorten the second sentence considerably to "He crushed the hallucinogenic pills then mixed them with beer [in a glass]".

 

[Skrej]

There is still a double 'the' before 'hallucinogenic'.